Dear Nora:

Couldn't you have used some other word than turgid?

It's a word I associate with lofty, overwritten prose, and not with foreplay, although lord knows I have read some romances in that style - not one of yours, I hasten to add. It's not a good word to use in a romance. But, then again it could have been worse: you could have used to describe something other than a throbbing pulse...

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